I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Harriet, this is beautiful. I love that you gave your post an original title and how easy it is for me to see all of the things that make you the amazing young lady that you are, as well as the things that contribute to your wellbeing. I am wondering if you could add to your post with a brief explanation of what your task was, and the site you used to make your word art, as when people see this, they may also want to make their own!
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Harriet, this is beautiful. I love that you gave your post an original title and how easy it is for me to see all of the things that make you the amazing young lady that you are, as well as the things that contribute to your wellbeing. I am wondering if you could add to your post with a brief explanation of what your task was, and the site you used to make your word art, as when people see this, they may also want to make their own!
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