I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
These are the insects I have made. I was
making them then my brother saw me and he came and made the top photo. Then my Mum came
and she made the bottom left photo which is like a fairy. I really enjoyed doing it.
Wow! These look so amazing! I am super impressed with what you have created. Tell your mum I love her fairy! I am really glad that this became an activity that the family got involved in too. Can you also make sure you put your photos in to your Reading Folder in Drive, then I can add them to our class blog as well.
Hi Harriet, I love your insects! You must have a lot of plants in your garden. I was thinking about these insect posts and thought one way you could add to them would be to create a bit of a backstory about your creature, what does it eat? How does it get around? Does it fly? I'd love to hear what you come up with. Whaea Vicki
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Wow! These look so amazing! I am super impressed with what you have created. Tell your mum I love her fairy! I am really glad that this became an activity that the family got involved in too. Can you also make sure you put your photos in to your Reading Folder in Drive, then I can add them to our class blog as well.
ReplyDeleteHi Harriet,
ReplyDeleteI love your insects! You must have a lot of plants in your garden. I was thinking about these insect posts and thought one way you could add to them would be to create a bit of a backstory about your creature, what does it eat? How does it get around? Does it fly? I'd love to hear what you come up with.
Whaea Vicki