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Friday 16 August 2019


Of course summer is the best season of the year like who wouldn’t agree with me. Here are some of the reasons why summer is the best season of the year. Firstly you can just jump in the pool without it being cold, and swim for the whole entire day. Without getting cold. Normally in summer rivers, beaches and pools are much more warm and you can go swimming in them as much as you want. There are also some really cool floaties that you can play with in it.

Secondly Christmas is in summer, one of the biggest events of the year for me. Because you get given presents and on Christmas all my family comes round and we have an absolute blast. Then the next day is boxing day, on boxing day my family comes to my house and we swim all day and do obstacle courses around the pool. It is way better than staying inside on a cold and gloomy winter's day.  On new years eve on the dot of midnight we sometimes all jump in the pool.

Thirdly you can stay outside until dark and not get cold. Just run around on the grass. Or go for an 8:30 swim and not get cold. You can have a BBQ every night and have your friends come over and play outside until dinner then go back outside after dinner. Or have dinner outside. I love the smell of sausages on the barbecue sizzling away. Those are all the reasons why summer is the best season of them all.

1 comment:

  1. Well done. You have written three great paragraphs about why summer is the best season. You have given good examples to support your thinking. One thing to remember, is that when you are starting with an adverb (Secondly, thirdly), you should have a comma. For example, Secondly, Christmas is in Summer...

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